Friday 5 August 2016

amazing story

                     W.A.L.T:write about a time that I hid.


                              


After dinner me,my cousins & their friends played hide and seek I wanted to hide with someone so I hid with josh in the hay shed,we climbed over the hay and into a small gap in the hay our legs were really stiff,we ducked down so the not even a little bit of us was showing.1.2.3 ready or not here I come ok it is time to be quiet as a mouse josh was sitting next to me and we were very cold and we were taking way too many breaths at a time. They came into the hay shed and they said “found you josh I knew we would find you” but they did not see me luckily. I had been hiding on my own for 1 hour I think and then finally I hear the words “ok we all give up so you can come out now” so I did but when I got out and I was going to say I am the winner but all I saw was the dark mist in the cold night so I creeped out into the bitter cold night and run up to the house and saw they all just on the couch watching tv. I said to them all“why did you guys leave me still hiding”, “we had given up looking for you and so we came in here” they said I said again “why didn't josh just tell you where I am” but they said nothing.I went to bed that night very cold and stiff suddenly a plan came into my mind to take revenge on them.