Friday 24 June 2016

global warming slide

W.A.L.T :global warming

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rhea
    I really liked the way you talked about something important happening
    in the world.
    Next time I think you should take out some of the photos:)

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  2. Hi Rhea,
    I liked the way you used capital letters at the start of sentiences and names.
    I agree with Eva for the next step.
    :) Abbie

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