Monday 19 June 2017

Boom writer chapters

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  1. Anonymous23 June 2017 at 09:43

    Hola! My name is Lily I am in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you have written a story related to school. This made me think about when I wrote a story about a teacher at school who all of a sudden turned into a screaming monster. Maybe next time you could read over your writing and make sure it makes sense. If you would like to see my learning type up http://wpslilyw.blogspot.co.nz/. Adiós!

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  2. Anonymous23 June 2017 at 10:50

    thank you for your helpful comment, also have you made a story about something like this before?

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